GED Reasoning Through Language ArtsExtended Response (Essay)Medium
A student is drafting the conclusion for an argumentative essay advocating for increased mental health services in schools. They have successfully summarized their main points and restated their thesis. To make the conclusion MOST impactful and persuasive, what additional element should the student include?
- AApologizing for any limitations or weaknesses in the essay's argument.
- BIntroducing new evidence to surprise the reader.
- CEnding with an emotional appeal to the reader's personal experiences.
- DSuggesting a broader implication or a call to action related to the argument.
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Correct answer: D. Suggesting a broader implication or a call to action related to the argument.
An impactful conclusion in an argumentative essay should do more than just summarize. It should leave the reader with a lasting impression by suggesting broader implications of the argument or proposing a call to action, thus demonstrating the real-world significance of the points made.
Why the other options are wrong
- A. Apologizing for limitations weakens the argument and undermines the writer's credibility.
- B. New evidence should be introduced in the body paragraphs; introducing it in the conclusion can confuse the reader.
- C. While an emotional appeal can be part of persuasion, a direct personal appeal might undermine the formal, objective tone of an academic argumentative essay.
Impactful Conclusion Elements
An impactful argumentative essay conclusion summarizes main points, restates the thesis, and then extends the argument by suggesting broader implications or a call to action, leaving a lasting impression.
- Goes beyond mere summary.
- Connects argument to wider context.
- Can include a call to action or final thought.
Memory trick: End your essay like a powerful speech: summarize, re-emphasize your main point, and then leave them with something to think about or do.