GED Reasoning Through Language ArtsExtended Response (Essay)Easy
A student is writing an argumentative essay and has developed several strong points. However, when reviewing the essay, they realize that some paragraphs lack sufficient evidence or explanation to fully convince the reader. Which aspect of argumentative writing needs the most attention in this scenario?
- ACorrectness of grammar and spelling.
- BClarity of the thesis statement.
- CDevelopment of ideas.
- DAppropriate use of transitions.
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Correct answer: C. Development of ideas.
When paragraphs lack sufficient evidence or explanation, it indicates a weakness in the development of ideas. Strong argumentative essays require each point to be thoroughly supported and elaborated upon to be persuasive and convincing.
Why the other options are wrong
- A. Grammar and spelling relate to conventions, which are important but do not address the lack of evidence or explanation for ideas.
- B. A clear thesis is foundational, but the problem described is with the support within paragraphs, not the main claim itself.
- D. Transitions relate to organization and flow between ideas, not the depth of support within individual ideas.
Development of Ideas
The process of elaborating on main points in an essay by providing sufficient evidence, examples, explanations, and analysis to fully support and clarify the argument.
- Ensures arguments are well-supported and convincing.
- Involves providing details, facts, statistics, and expert opinions.
- Requires explaining how evidence connects to and proves the point.
Memory trick: Build your argument strong with clear thoughts and solid proof.