GED Reasoning Through Language ArtsExtended Response (Essay)Medium
A student is writing an essay arguing that local governments should invest more in public transportation. They have a strong thesis and well-developed body paragraphs, but they notice that the essay often jumps abruptly from one idea to the next, making it difficult for the reader to follow the logical progression. Which aspect of writing needs improvement, and what is the most effective way to address it?
- AConventions; proofread for grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes.
- BOrganization; incorporate transitional words and phrases between sentences and paragraphs.
- CClarity; use simpler vocabulary to make the points easier to understand.
- DDevelopment of ideas; add more detailed examples and statistics to each point.
Show answer & explanationAnswer & explanation
Correct answer: B. Organization; incorporate transitional words and phrases between sentences and paragraphs.
Abrupt jumps between ideas indicate a lack of smooth transitions, which is a key component of effective organization. Using transitional words and phrases (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'however,' 'in addition,' 'consequently') helps guide the reader through the logical flow of the argument, improving overall coherence.
Why the other options are wrong
- A. Proofreading for conventions is important, but it won't solve problems with the logical connection of ideas.
- C. While simpler vocabulary can improve clarity, it doesn't address the issue of abrupt jumps in logical flow between ideas.
- D. Adding more examples relates to development, but it won't fix the issue of ideas not connecting smoothly if transitions are absent.
Transitions in Writing
Words, phrases, or sentences that create connections between ideas, sentences, and paragraphs, ensuring smooth flow and logical progression.
- Signal relationships (e.g., addition, contrast, cause/effect).
- Improve coherence and readability.
- Can be simple words (e.g., 'also') or complex phrases (e.g., 'in contrast').
Memory trick: Build bridges between thoughts, so readers can cross with ease.