ACT (Enhanced)EnglishEasy
A student is writing a research paper on the economic impact of artificial intelligence. They want to ensure their writing maintains a formal and objective tone. Which of the following sentences should the student revise to better align with this goal?
- AIt's pretty clear that AI will totally change how we work, which is awesome.
- BThe economic implications of artificial intelligence warrant further comprehensive investigation.
- CArtificial intelligence is poised to revolutionize several industries, potentially leading to significant economic growth.
- DStudies suggest that AI implementation may result in both job displacement and the creation of new roles.
Show answer & explanationAnswer & explanation
Correct answer: A. It's pretty clear that AI will totally change how we work, which is awesome.
Option B uses informal language ('pretty clear,' 'totally change,' 'awesome') and subjective opinions, which is inconsistent with a formal and objective tone required for a research paper.
Why the other options are wrong
- B. This sentence is formal and objective, using academic vocabulary ('implications,' 'warrant,' 'comprehensive investigation').
- C. This sentence maintains a formal and objective tone, using measured language.
- D. This sentence uses cautious, evidence-based language ('suggest,' 'may result') appropriate for an objective tone.
Formal and Objective Tone
A formal and objective tone in academic writing avoids colloquialisms, slang, personal opinions, and emotional language, instead focusing on presenting facts, evidence, and logical arguments in a detached and professional manner.
- Avoids 'I' or 'you' (first/second person).
- Uses precise and academic vocabulary.
- Focuses on facts and evidence, not personal feelings.
- Avoids contractions and colloquialisms.
Memory trick: Academic writing: Always Accurate, Clear, and Credible.