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A student is revising their essay and wants to ensure consistent verb tense. They have written the following paragraph: 'Sarah walked into the room. She sees her friend sitting by the window. They began to chat excitedly.' Which of the following revisions corrects the verb tense inconsistency?
- ASarah walks into the room. She saw her friend sitting by the window. They began to chat excitedly.
- BSarah walked into the room. She sees her friend sitting by the window. They begin to chat excitedly.
- CSarah walks into the room. She sees her friend sitting by the window. They begin to chat excitedly.
- DSarah walked into the room. She saw her friend sitting by the window. They began to chat excitedly.
Show answer & explanationAnswer & explanation
Correct answer: D. Sarah walked into the room. She saw her friend sitting by the window. They began to chat excitedly.
The paragraph begins in the past tense ('walked') and ends in the past tense ('began'). The inconsistent verb is 'sees,' which is in the present tense. Changing 'sees' to 'saw' (past tense) ensures that all actions occur in the same past tense timeframe.
Why the other options are wrong
- A. This option mixes past and present tenses ('walks,' 'saw,' 'began'), creating inconsistency.
- B. This option mixes past and present tenses ('walked,' 'sees,' 'begin'), maintaining inconsistency.
- C. This option attempts to use present tense but incorrectly keeps 'began' in the past, creating inconsistency.
Verb Tense Consistency
Verb tense consistency means maintaining the same tense for verbs that describe actions occurring in the same timeframe within a sentence or paragraph, unless there is a specific reason to shift tenses.
- Maintain consistent tense for actions in the same sequence.
- Shift tenses only to indicate a change in timeframe.
- Helps ensure clarity and smooth flow.
Memory trick: Keep your verbs in time, don't let them chime out of line!