Digital SATReading and Writing: Expression of IdeasMedium
A student is writing an essay arguing that stricter regulations are needed for cryptocurrency markets. She has presented data illustrating the volatility of these markets and the risks to individual investors. She now wants to introduce the argument that unregulated cryptocurrencies also pose a threat to national financial stability. Which option provides the most effective introduction to this new argument, maintaining a formal tone?
- AIt is also worth noting that unregulated cryptocurrencies present considerable risks to national financial stability.
- BFurthermore, the unregulated nature of cryptocurrencies extends its potential harm to national financial stability.
- COn top of all that, cryptos can mess with whole countries' money systems.
- DHowever, beyond individual investor risks, unregulated cryptocurrencies also threaten national financial stability.
Show answer & explanationAnswer & explanation
Correct answer: B. Furthermore, the unregulated nature of cryptocurrencies extends its potential harm to national financial stability.
The phrase 'Furthermore' effectively signals the addition of a new, related argument that builds upon the previous points without contrasting them. It maintains a formal tone and clearly indicates that the scope of the problem is expanding from individual investors to national financial stability.
Why the other options are wrong
- A. While grammatically correct and formal, 'It is also worth noting that' is less direct and less emphatic than 'Furthermore' for introducing a significant new point.
- C. This option uses informal language ('On top of all that,' 'mess with,' 'whole countries' money systems') which is inappropriate for a formal argumentative essay.
- D. The use of 'However' implies a contrast or qualification, which is not the intended relationship; the new argument is an expansion, not a counterpoint.
Additive Transition (Formal)
Formal words or phrases used to introduce additional information or arguments that support or expand upon previous points, maintaining an academic or professional tone.
- Used in academic essays, reports, and formal writing.
- Signals an expansion of ideas, not a contrast.
- Examples: 'furthermore,' 'moreover,' 'in addition,' 'additionally,' 'consequently,' 'therefore.'
Memory trick: Formal writing means fancy words, not slang, to connect your ideas like a pro!