Digital SATReading and Writing: Expression of IdeasMedium
A student is writing an essay arguing for the importance of funding public libraries. She has just presented data showing a decline in library usage over the past decade. She now wants to introduce a point that challenges this decline by highlighting a different, positive trend in library services. Which choice best accomplishes this goal?
- AThis decline, however, does not tell the whole story; libraries have simultaneously expanded their digital offerings and community programs.
- BWhile some argue that libraries are becoming obsolete, their role as community hubs remains vital.
- CFurthermore, many libraries are struggling with outdated infrastructure and reduced operating hours.
- DIn conclusion, the data clearly indicates a need for increased funding to reverse the trend of declining library usage.
Show answer & explanationAnswer & explanation
Correct answer: A. This decline, however, does not tell the whole story; libraries have simultaneously expanded their digital offerings and community programs.
The student needs to introduce a contrasting positive trend despite the previously mentioned decline. Option A directly addresses this by using a contrasting transitional phrase and presenting a positive counterpoint.
Why the other options are wrong
- B. While it presents a counterargument to obsolescence, it doesn't directly address or challenge the 'decline in usage' data with a specific positive trend in services.
- C. This option adds another negative point, further supporting the decline, rather than challenging it with a positive trend.
- D. This option serves as a conclusion and does not introduce a contrasting positive trend, instead reinforcing the negative data.
Contrastive Transition
A word or phrase used to introduce information that goes against or challenges what was previously stated, often highlighting a different perspective or unexpected outcome.
- Connects opposing ideas.
- Signals a shift in argument or focus.
- Examples: however, nevertheless, on the other hand, in contrast.
Memory trick: Contrastive transitions are like a seesaw: one idea goes down, the other goes up to balance it.