ATI TEAS (Test of Essential Academic Skills) Version 7English and Language UsageMedium
A medical professional is writing a patient's discharge summary. Which of the following sentences demonstrates the most precise and formal language?
- AThe patient's pain got better after the meds.
- BThe patient felt less pain when they took the pills.
- CPain reduction was noted subsequent to the giving of drugs.
- DThe patient experienced an improvement in pain following medication administration.
Show answer & explanationAnswer & explanation
Correct answer: D. The patient experienced an improvement in pain following medication administration.
Option B uses formal vocabulary ('experienced an improvement,' 'following medication administration') and a clear, professional tone appropriate for medical documentation. It avoids colloquialisms and passive constructions that can obscure meaning.
Why the other options are wrong
- A. Uses informal language ('got better,' 'meds') inappropriate for formal medical documentation.
- B. Uses informal language ('felt less pain,' 'took the pills') unsuitable for a discharge summary.
- C. While attempting formality, 'giving of drugs' is somewhat awkward and less concise than 'medication administration.'
Formal vs. Informal Language
Formal language is characterized by a serious, objective, and precise tone, typically used in academic, professional, and official contexts. Informal language is more relaxed, conversational, and often includes slang or colloquialisms, suitable for casual communication.
- Formal language avoids contractions, slang, and personal opinions.
- It uses complete sentences and precise vocabulary.
- Informal language is common in personal emails, texts, and casual conversations.
Memory trick: Clarity, Conciseness, Courtesy, and Correctness are Key.